大家是否有英文文章需要外籍人士校訂呢?請幫幫我們的朋友Helen,長年幫助流浪動物下來已無積蓄,目前身體不適,也無法找到合適的工作,請大家給她個工作機會

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2008/04/07 01:52

不知道大家是否有英文文章需要外籍人士幫忙校訂呢?請幫幫我們的朋友Helen,長年幫助流浪動物下來已無積蓄,目前身體不適,也無法找到合適的工作,請大家給她個工作機會。

 

Helen是來自英國,擁有科學學士學位,目前在高雄某美語班教書,但是身體狀況不甚良好,所以美語班排的課也是不多,加上Helen近幾年來不辭辛勞的投身於幫助流浪動物工作上,經濟狀況真的不好,他很希望能利用他的長才來賺取狗狗們和自己的醫藥費。他曾經校訂的英文文章包含: 醫學期刊論文、工程博士論文、建築檢定、經濟文章等。以下為一範例:

 

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I. Introduction

    In recent years, helicopter/shipboard integrated operation technique has been widely used in military and commercial applications, and reached the requirements of the ultimate goal. For commercial applications, the technique of helicopter landing and taking off at sea is a powerful assistance for important economic benefit development, such as oil mining operation and natural gas exploitation. The helicopter has to be responsible for transporting outstanding oil mining explorers such as geologists, marine scientists and related engineers to the exploration ship safely. Also, the helicopter is a great helper to build the valuable oil platform on the sea. As for emergent military shipboard operations, a helicopter is performed to fight against anti-submarine and airborne threats, and to transport soldiers to modern destroyers or aircraft carriers. Besides, helicopter/shipboard integrated operation technique is often applied to the missions of rescuing sufferers from shipwrecks and air crashes.

 

1.1  Literature Survey

   The U.S. Navy helicopter/shipboard dynamic interface research was originated in the 1970s. With the help of literature [1][2], the U.S. Navy developed the prediction of helicopter landing behavior program to provide the standard as assists the pilot to improve the helicopter shipboard-landing operation. Because it contains latent highly risk in flight environment for helicopter/shipboard integrated operation, therefore, this is the most challenge and highly dangerous flying mission to pilots, extremely intense flying training is needed of course. The helicopter/shipboard integrated operation is called the helicopter/shipboard dynamic interface testing in this research program. U.S. Navy did the test with all types of helicopter landing on random size ships in different flight conditions.

 

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I. Introduction

    In recent years, a helicopter/shipboard integrated operation technique has been widely used in military and commercial applications, and reached the requirements of its ultimate goal. For commercial applications, the technique of helicopter landings and taking off at sea is a powerful assistance to important economic developments, such as oil mining operations and natural gas exploitation. The helicopter has to be responsible for transporting important oil mining personnel, such as geologists, marine scientists and related engineers, to the exploration ship safely. Also, the helicopter is a great helper in the building of valuable oil platforms out at sea... As for emergent military shipboard operations, a helicopter is utilized to fight against submarine and airborne threats, and to transport soldiers to modern destroyers or aircraft carriers. In addition, the helicopter/shipboard integrated operation technique is often applied in the missions of rescuing shipwreck and air crash sufferers.

 

1.1  Literature Survey

   The U.S. Navy helicopter/shipboard dynamic interface research was originated in the 1970s. With the help of literature [1][2], the U.S. Navy developed a prediction for helicopter landing behavior program to provide the standard to assist the pilot to improve the helicopter shipboard-landing operation. Because a helicopter/shipboard integrated operation involves a latent, high risk flight environment it is therefore  the most challenging and most dangerous flying mission for pilots. Hence, extremely intense flying training is needed for all pilots. The helicopter/shipboard integrated operation is called the helicopter/shipboard dynamic interface testing in this research program. The U.S. Navy did the testing with all types of helicopters landing on random size ships in different flight conditions.

 

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謝謝大家。

 

(小宇一直覺得,在我們的家園,有著來自遙遠國度的外國人,為了幫助更多的流浪動物,選擇留在我們的土地上,付出他的一切,他的所有,以及他的真心。他放棄了英國舒適的生活,曾經到過許多地方,但,沒有一個地方讓他選擇停留,是台灣的熱情、台灣需要幫助的浪浪,讓他佇腳。他在這邊,沒有家人,在他生病的時候陪伴著他的是他從公園從鬼門關救回來的狗狗,在他沒有錢付自己的醫藥費時,他仍帶著路邊撿來的狗狗上獸醫院,我們台灣的子民,有這樣的朋友,夫復何求呢?)

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